Saturday, June 27, 2026

Fishballs, Group, Supergirl

 Thursday I worked on Agnes, so when I woke on Friday I finished her off. Ended the night by starting “Pretty Things” on Netflix. Go Alasdair Gray!

Like I said, the writing mania got me early in the morning. Problem is I needed to get in touch with the surgeon, and I missed out on that. Monday. It will have to be done on Monday.

The phone is still out.

I ate at The Dumpling House, as I usually do. This time I had fishball & rice noodle soup. Wonderful! 

I did group. Notes will be published over the weekend.

Then I went to see Supergirl.

Supergirl was much better than expected. I am not sure I am being original here, but it brought to mind Mad Max Fury Road. What is going to piss off the fanboys is that it is not a typical superhero movie with all the spectacle and spandex of a WWE fight. It is a coming of age story wrapped in a superhero story. It is very low key compared to what else is out there for superhero movies. Yes, there are some strange shots. I really do not know Milly Alcock's work, but she pulled off a character I never liked. Yeah, I was a terrible sexist when I was young and thought Supergirl was kind of stupid and for girls. It is not something you need to rush to see - that would've been Death of Robin Hood - but is better than the reviews. 

Additionally. Gunn has added a character I also hated as a kid and made the damn thing work: Krypto. Yes, I thought Krypto was stupid. Probably not having a cape and having awful behavior helps.

One last thing, there was a preview for Klara and the Sun. I did not know Natasha Lyonne is in it. I am in love with her. Badly. At one point in Supergirl I got thinking about what it would've been like with Natasha as Supergirl, 20 years ago, a cigarette dangling from her lip….

Anyway, I just got home. It may be a short night, this was supposed to be a vacation day, but I started revising "After Making Landfall”.

I listened to a couple of video reviews of Supergirl while I did the revising.


 
 

The comic book boys can't (won't?) judge a movie as a movie. Not that the movie critics were all that favorable, looking for a superhero movie and all that attendant spectacle. When it is more and less than a superhero movie. Others went on about whether it was a good feminist movie. I am in no position to say anything about that since the movie never spouted any manifesto, and the original writer who was a woman would probably have put one in if she thought it necessary. This morning while waiting for the bus to take me to Payless, I thought if there is a feminist message in the move then it fits the Annie Lennox model.


What I found to be the most accurate take on the movie I saw: Supergirl review – sprightly and sparkling superhero yarn without the usual baffling DC backstory ( Movies | The Guardian)

I have chipped away at the emails but not enough. I need to get back to my story, so this is all you get for now.

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What Hasn't Changed In 400 Years?

 I was looking for something I thought I had read by Sir Francis Bacon when I was 18. I did not find exactly what I was looking for, but I want to offer you something that came close. 

Novum Organum by Lord Bacon (The Project Gutenberg eBook) is where British philosophy starts and is still worth reading. 

XLV. The human understanding, from its peculiar nature, easily supposes a greater degree of order and equality in things than it really finds; and although many things in nature be sui generis and most irregular, will yet invent parallels and conjugates and relatives, where no such thing is. Hence the fiction, that all celestial bodies move in perfect circles, thus rejecting entirely spiral and serpentine lines (except as explanatory terms).[12] Hence also the element[23] of fire is introduced with its peculiar orbit,[13] to keep square with those other three which are objects of our senses. The relative rarity of the elements (as they are called) is arbitrarily made to vary in tenfold progression, with many other dreams of the like nature.[14] Nor is this folly confined to theories, but it is to be met with even in simple notions.

XLVI. The human understanding, when any proposition has been once laid down (either from general admission and belief, or from the pleasure it affords), forces everything else to add fresh support and confirmation; and although most cogent and abundant instances may exist to the contrary, yet either does not observe or despises them, or gets rid of and rejects them by some distinction, with violent and injurious prejudice, rather than sacrifice the authority of its first conclusions. It was well answered by him[15] who was[24] shown in a temple the votive tablets suspended by such as had escaped the peril of shipwreck, and was pressed as to whether he would then recognize the power of the gods, by an inquiry, But where are the portraits of those who have perished in spite of their vows? All superstition is much the same, whether it be that of astrology, dreams, omens, retributive judgment, or the like, in all of which the deluded believers observe events which are fulfilled, but neglect and pass over their failure, though it be much more common. But this evil insinuates itself still more craftily in philosophy and the sciences, in which a settled maxim vitiates and governs every other circumstance, though the latter be much more worthy of confidence. Besides, even in the absence of that eagerness and want of thought (which we have mentioned), it is the peculiar and perpetual error of the human understanding to be more moved and excited by affirmatives than negatives, whereas it ought duly and regularly to be impartial; nay, in establishing any true axiom the negative instance is the most powerful.

XLVII. The human understanding is most excited by that which strikes and enters the mind at once and suddenly, and by which the imagination is immediately filled and inflated. It then begins almost imperceptibly to conceive and suppose that everything is similar to the few objects which have taken possession of the mind, while it is very slow and unfit for the transition to the remote and heterogeneous instances by which axioms are tried as by fire, unless the office be imposed upon it by severe regulations and a powerful authority.

Having read that, can you really think human nature has changed in 400 years?

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Friday, June 26, 2026

Novels - Where Do We go From Here?

Here I am supposed to be working on my writing and getting distracted by ideas of other books. 

My excuse for why I am doing this: How F. Scott Fitzgerald’s Overlooked Story Collection Helped Me Write My LA Novel (Literary Hub) made me realize how little I knew about Fitzgerald's short stories. And the vagraies of success. And that a writer has to write.

 And The Consensus Sublime ( Los Angeles Review of Books) sealed the deal. Just goofing off, giving myself a minute of time before I started working, and then I got lost. It is a critique of The Guardian's 100 Best Novels list, and I could dismiss it as just another of many. 

What distinguishes The Guardian’s list within this long and somewhat dismal tradition is not that it judges—all canons judge—but the specific character of its public-facing authority. Academic canons carry, at least formally, the caution of scholarly qualification. They present themselves as provisional disciplinary instruments. The Guardian list borrows the aura of institutional expertise—“authors, critics and academics worldwide” voted, the editors announce—while simultaneously billing itself as a broad, democratic, cultural event, open to all. It does not offer provisional aesthetic judgments. It offers monuments.

Monuments. That did me in. Yesterday, after the writer's meeting, we got talking about how sequels suck. They keep selling us the same thing with a new package until the life goes out of what is under the package. Monuments are dead things being worshipped. Of course, Gore Vidal got there before me (albeit I should have read the essay mentioned over 30 years ago):

Beneath any such exercise lies a problem almost never seriously engaged: the question of what it means to judge a novel in the first place. Aesthetic judgment, as Gore Vidal observed across a long career of elegant provocation, is neither private mood nor laboratory fact. In his essay “Novelists and Critics of the 1940s,” Vidal argued that critics must proceed as though absolute standards for literary value exist, since without some orientation toward the absolute, relative judgments dissolve into mere preference. But to reify those standards into monuments is disastrous, as literary history repeatedly demonstrates that what one moment consecrates, the next dismantles with humiliating ease.

Here is where I became glad to have read the essay (and pretty much confirms I read the Vidal essay).

Consider what such machinery cannot easily process. There is no HonorĂ© de Balzac on this list. The absence is not, in the first instance, an injustice to French literature. It is an exposure of the list’s narrowed theory of what the novel is.

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Lost Illusions is a novel about the manufacture of literary value, and in this, it anticipates the very social machinery by which the Guardian list itself was assembled. Vidal, returning in several essays to what he called the missing “Balzacian concern,” lamented that the disappearance of economic motive from serious fiction represented a narrowing of the form itself, a retreat from the novel’s appetite for entangling human consciousness with narrative structure.

In Balzac, money is never merely money; it is the medium through which every other value—love, friendship, artistic integrity, political conviction—is tested and, usually, dissolved. A list that cannot accommodate this novel has quietly decided, without admitting it, that the novel’s proper business lies in moral illumination, perhaps, or psychological interiority, or the production of teachable social empathy. These are not unworthy concerns. But they are not the whole of what the novel, at its most exorbitant and alert, knows how to do.

And Balzac’s absence is not an omission. It is a theory.

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The omissions that matter most in the Guardian list are not, then, a grievance catalog. They are, again, a theory. Naguib Mahfouz’s Cairo Trilogy (1956–57) is absent; so are Sadegh Hedayat’s The Blind Owl (1936) and Rabindranath Tagore’s The Home and the World (1916). These works do not deserve inclusion as diplomatic representatives of their traditions—not that every tradition warrants a seat. These works make formal, philosophical, and affective claims that exceed a significant portion of what the list includes.

Mahfouz’s absence, Hedayat’s absence, Tagore’s absence—these do not reflect regional bias or demographic oversight. They reflect the list’s operative theory of the novel, which turns out, on examination, to be a theory of Anglophone teachability and institutional processability, disguised as universal aesthetic judgment. The omitted novel is not merely absent. It exposes what the list, by its inclusions, silently presupposes. 

 I was reading Mahfouz, finally, then got sidetracked. More reason to get back to him. And for a call to arms that I cannot resist:

The novel’s actual history is older, stranger, more monstrous, more multilingual, and wilder than any professional consensus can accommodate. A counter-list of the institutionally neglected would only be parochialism reversed, the same divination performed with different auspices. The solution would require a different account attentive to what counts as true novelistic achievement, and that cannot be recovered by a better poll.

It can only be reopened by reading: by the willingness to let unfamiliar formal ambitions disturb the machinery through which recognition, in any given moment, decides what it is prepared to call great.

I have waited too long to be good at what I want to do.  But maybe I still have time to do something useful.

Previously, I had read Weekly Readings #228 (06/15/26-06/21/26) - by John Pistelli  (THE GREATEST BOOKS OF THE 20TH CENTURY). Which is almost the opposite of trying to make a canon.

What are you going to do?

What are Midwestern writers? When I started Central European writers, I thought I found people in the same position as I was. Reading Mitsuyoshi Numano's Is There Such a Thing as Central (Eastern) European Literature? An Attempt to Reconsider Central European Consciousness on the Basis of Contemporary Literature keeps that idea alive. Take away the difference in a monolingual culture. Indiana is small and torn up by identity issues. We are not Easterners, although much of our past comes from there, and we have our envy of New York. We are not Southerners; for all of those came from there to here, for all of us having some of the same values; and the West is too rough and tumble to be us, even as our own past was just as rough and tumble. 

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Thursday, June 25, 2026

Misery and The Only Things That Have Excited Me The Past Few Days

 It has been a rough week, pain distracts and saps my energy; the simplest things take too long. I can do my research project, up to a point. I have been trying to find the stuff I need for revising “Agnes” and getting her out. That was two days ago. This post was started over 2 hours ago. Interrupted by the distraction of aches that should have been gone days ago but not (at least the bleeding stopped) and a computer crash. I thought to take in a movie today, but I am going nowhere except for smokes and caffeine.

Yesterday, I made it to Walmart for some meds. And down to the convenience store for smokes. There was also the writer's group. Then an afternoon of annoying, distracting agony followed where I got nothing more than a few articles read and watching “The Umbrella Academy.” It is easier to watch a tv show than a movie; I can get away from it quicker. The only problem is when the silly thing turns out to have some intriguing points. Like wrapping a dysfunctional family up into a superhero story that is also a satire of the superhero; a story where the heroes are the cause of the problem rather than its solution.

Tuesday was just about like Wednesday - only out briefly - but more miserable. 

I read The New ‘Odyssey’ Movie Is Sparking a Right-Wing Backlash. This Female Scholar Knows It Well (WIRED). Elon Musk is a silly person; so are these criticisms of Nolan's The Odyssey. Imaginations limited by their knowledge they are inadequate to the job. A black woman plays Helen? So what? Can she act? Yesterday I mentione I intended to see Supergirl to the bus driver, and he refused to consider it because of Milly Alcock's politics. What does politics have to do with how she can act? Nothing. It is the fear that they who do not share their politics can do the job. Anyone who fears their ideas cannot bear scrutiny knows their ideas are insubstantial.

A Rural Awakening? – Sheila Kennedy. Farmers seeing they've been conned by Trump? Well, they live pretty close to the bone, so they might be the first to feel reality creeping in from behind all the BS spewed by the President.

I had a great aunt who introduced me to politics. This September she will be dead 40 years. She liked betting on horse races; she was the only person in my family who has been to Churchill Downs. When Indiana was fighting over legalizing betting on horse racing, she condemned the Republicans controlling the General Assembly as being paid off by the surrounding states. The Republicans talked about the deletrious moral effects this would have on Indiana - that it might end in prostitution being legal. Well, that didn't happen - outside the Republican Party. Now, they're doing the same thing with marijuana: Using data to guide cannabis policy decisions ( Indiana Capital Chronicle).

By the way, my great aunt always voted straight ticket Republican.

Instead of morals, we've got bitterness and anger and hate and fear.

 Supreme Court allows immigration officials to turn away asylum seekers at the border (POLITICO)

'Nobody wants you here': Shakopee residents harass Somali family while house shopping (FOX 9 Minneapolis-St. Paul)

Supreme Court sides with maker of Roundup weedkiller (AP News).

 America's great political implosion (Axios)

 Annoyed by the low-level rumbling of pain, I am done with posting for now. I'll use the time to get some things done here (the dishes do not wash themselves), go down to the convenience store), then deal with “Agnes”. Let's see if will matches desire.

Wishful thinking for me, considering age and the tolls paid: 


 

Remember the Rock Island Line!


 

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Thinking About Rejections and Getting Them

Finding Your Angel in the Haystack  (Lit Mag News) took me into places I do not really know - publishing and the magazine market - even though I have been in the middle of it for the better part of five years. It also confirmed what I sensed as a viable approach is correct.

For many writers (especially those new to the publication game), a submission rejection is a conclusive stamp of disapproval from a respectable institution. The whole of the organization that sends it, along with many others in short order, are raining “NO!” down upon you, decisively, and with regularity. You are left cold and shivering, drenched in negatives, and will need to spend a goodly amount of time getting dry before you can weather that storm again. Rejections are depleting. They are setbacks. You do not pass go. You do not collect $200.

That feeling of depletion certainly doesn’t serve you. Especially when you consider that quiet battles are actually raging at all of your favorite lit pubs, and your work may well be at the center of them. You’ll get clues to that possibility embedded in some of your rejections, and once you know what to look for, you can walk away from rejections energized.

Putting rejections into perspective: (3) Ted Gioia (@tedgioia): “This is a good time to recall that Gabriel GarcĂ­a MĂ¡rquez got rejected by The New Yorker in 1981—and the next year he won the Nobel Prize in Literature.”  

Two rejections received so far for this week. 

6/24: 

Thank you for submitting your work, "Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory Town, 1836 – 1984." Regretfully, we cannot find a place for it in our upcoming issue, but we wish you the best of luck placing it elsewhere.

At Epiphany we are committed to evaluating every submission we receive thoughtfully and respectfully. Many issues factor into every decision we make either to publish a piece or pass on it, from its consonance or dissonance with other work we've accepted to the simple issue of personal preference, which cannot be anything but subjective. To familiarize yourself with the work we do (and some of the work we've loved best), check out our website, subscribe to our print magazine, or consider buying a digital subscription for full access to our current issues and 20+ year archives.

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We value long relationships with the writers and artists who entrust us with their work, and hope you’ll keep us in mind for other submissions in the future.

Sincerely,

The Editors

 6/25: “After Making Landfall” garnered another rejection.

Thank you for sending us your submission for consideration for the Fairlight Books short stories website.

Unfortunately, we didn’t think that the story was quite right for our list, so we will decline from publishing your work on this occasion. Please do not feel that this is a reflection on your writing. We enjoyed reading your work, and felt it was well written.

Please feel free to take a look at the stories on our website to get a feel for what we are publishing, and we would welcome further submissions of short stories from you in the future.

Best wishes,

The Fairlight Books Editorial Team

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Fairlight Books Ltd
Summertown Pavilion, 18–24 Middle Way, Oxford, OX2 7LG
https://www.fairlightbooks.co.uk/

 Ideas of what to do after being rejected: (4) No MFA Required - by Kristen Weber 

The good news is that you don’t need an editor’s title to do the same thing. The next time you read your manuscript, don’t try to fix anything. Print a hard copy out if you can and mark the places where you have a reaction.

B for bored.

C for confused.

R for rushed.

M for more.

Don’t stop to solve the problem. Don’t rewrite the chapter. Don’t convince yourself the feeling isn’t real. Just mark it and keep going. By the time you reach the end of the manuscript, you’ll have something incredibly valuable: a map.

I have been trying to find the energy I need for revising “Agnes” and getting her out. That was two days ago. This post was started over 2 hours ago. Interrupted by the distraction of aches that should have been gone days ago but not, and a computer crash. I thought to take in a movie today, but I am going nowhere except for smokes and caffeine. Today is the day to deal with my story, and I am applying Ms. Weber's ideas to the story.

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Monday, June 22, 2026

A Submission and A Piece About Getting paid

 First, Q: Why do so few literary magazines pay contributors...when so many genre magazines do?  (Lit Mag News) explains a bit about the culture of literary magazines. I have been targeting those who pay something first, especially since most charge a reading fee. It is just that I have spent most of my life thinking there has to be a profit for labor. I temper that with the thoughts of building a resume and getting the experience. This essay makes non-payment easier to swallow knowing what I am writing has no real home.

Such as “Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory, 1976–1984”, which got another rejection yesterday.

Thank you for sending "Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory, 1976 - 1984" to Southeast Review. While we haven't chosen the story for publication, we are grateful for the opportunity to have read and considered it. We wish you the best of luck placing it elsewhere. 

Sincerely,

The Editors

Southeast Review

http://www.southeastreview.org

Better than a sharp stick to the eye.

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Sunday, June 21, 2026

Books on Writing

 I Was Lied To About 'On Writing' by Stephen King is another testament to that book on writing. As I have written before on here, I was told around the turn of the century to read it, but I did not, and when I did my first reaction was that I had been a damn fool for waiting too long. 

I would say at it’s core, the two messages that are strongest in this book are that of honesty and Joy. Stephen king talks a lot about how the only way to write things organically and convincingly, whether it be characters or dialogue or your writers voice, Is to be honest with yourself, and to put that honesty on the page. I think confirmation of this was present throughout the entire book, and I can say with little doubt that Stephen King is genuinely himself.

His next message however, is about joy, and how joy is both the motivation for writing, and the point of writing. This is evident from his constant life stories about his family, his wife, and his children. It even includes his story of being hit by a car (sorry for leaving that out).

I think to show you the essence of this message, I will leave you with one final quotes of “ON Writing”:

“Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well. It’s about getting up, getting well, and getting over. Getting happy, okay?”

The best book on writing I’ve ever read - by Mason Currey is about a book directed more to essayists, but I found it applied to me.

In the book, Gornick provides an insightful and convincing answer to a question that has always nagged at me, namely: Why do certain pieces of writing “work” while others emphatically do not, despite the author’s best intentions and maximum effort?

Gornick begins with a simple observation about selves: that all of us contain a variety of them. One person might be, for instance, “a daughter, a lover, a bird-watcher, a New Yorker,” among many other things. And a piece of writing succeeds when the writer invokes the best self to tell the particular story at hand.

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Gornick argues that every work of literature has a situation—“the context or circumstances, sometimes the plot”—and a story—“the emotional experience that preoccupies the writer: the insight, the wisdom, the thing one has come to say.” The persona is like the bridge between these two: the vehicle for transforming a situation into a story. At the same time: By telling the story, the persona comes into focus and this is the story as much as what is told.

This last version of “Agnes” is on my mind. I sent it off to KH with plenty of questions. But the biggest question is why it takes me so long to see how to tell a story best. I still think it comes down to me not seeing the forest for the trees, that obsessing over composition obscures the composition. I take it as a sign that I still do not know what I am doing, and what I am doing then I am not doing a good job.

Speaking of which, I devoured this, running a checklist of what I do: Don't over-engineer how the reader "hears" your words (Nathan Bransford)

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