Thursday, July 16, 2026

Bad News and Other Stuff

 The writer's group did not meet.

I got word from the doctor that they moved my surgery and I need to be there at 5:30 Am. Not a problem if I had my own transportation. My sister was to take me, so I called her. The number I have is an old one and the right one was lost when my last phone died. Emails were sent without a reply. Grasping at straws right now.

I spent most of yesterday working on submissions, and not in the way I intended.

“The First Day of Feeling Free” - Strange Pilgrims - is actually a chapter from “Chasing Ashes”. I spent several working it around into more of a standalone piece. LibreOffice has taken to shutting down and I do not know why.

“The Unintended Consequences of Art” - The Submission Pit - was meant to go elsewhere only it had been previously submitted and the site would not let me use the same title. Witless, I decided to send it to this site with a change of the name of the aliens instead of changing the title.

A little less mopey. A nap in the evening. Email worked on. Some side reading, even if not of what I should be reading. I started a new short story just to get a paragraph out of my head. Not much of a day. 

 Being a Novelist Only Costs Romantic Compromises and Debilitating Debt (Electric Literature ) is a story I want to recommend.

I read Lolita in prison. Nabokov's writing was the best thing. Gabriela de Mendonça Gomes's The Spurious Perversity of Lolita (Book XI) does put some of the novel's problems in perspective.

In his essay, “Good Readers and Good Writers,” Nabokov argues that, “if one begins with a ready made generalization, one begins at the wrong end and travels away from the book before one has started to understand it.”  By the way, however, this doesn’t mean that anyone, including Nabokov, believes that the reader should be giving H.H. the benefit of the doubt or a charitable reading; the foreword to the novel is framed as an editorial note by a fictional psychologist, Dr. John Ray, Jr. who calls H.H. “horrible,” “abject,” and a “shining example of moral leprosy.”  So, no one goes into Lolita thinking he’s the good guy––or at least they shouldn’t.  

Professor Dwyer reconstructs her students’ claim that “by assigning Lolita I am perpetuating trauma and may even be perpetuating rape culture.” And retorts “this last suggestion runs so counter to my own beliefs about what literature does.”  Because there’s an important distinction to be made, which nowadays seems to have become forgotten when it comes to works of literature: representation does not equal romanticization.  

Nabokov goes on to say: “Nothing is more boring or more unfair to the author than starting to read, say, Madame Bovary, with the preconceived notion that it is a denunciation of the bourgeoisie.”  The tedious and benighted nature of this procession strikes a clear resonance with his own text.  I had a wonderful literature professor who told us never to read the back of the novels we were reading in her class....

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And another thing, Lolita is more about America, postwar America—it’s temporal setting—and present-day America than anything else.  Hand-in-hand with H.H. being the quintessentially unreliable narrator is the novel’s quintessentially Americanness presented in its tropes: the road trip he takes with Dolores, the life in suburbia in which he first encounters her, the U.S. popular culture allusions strewn throughout the novel, the fact that it begins with an extensive allusion to Poe’s “Annabel Lee.”  Just as we ought to be suspicious of H.H.’s nomial transfiguration of Dolores into Lolita, erasing the pain and replacing it with imposed seductive obsessions, so should we throw a scrutinizing eye on the narratives the U.S. was/is weaving about itself.  

And this warning is more relevant than ever.  As Professor Breen points out, we are living in a world where young girls are, and have been since before Nabokov’s novel, serially commodified.  The darkest side of this perverse cultural valuation has been presented to us in its most bare-face cruelty in the release of the Epstein files.  How Nabokov’s gripping, seductive prose hides within it profound violence teaches us to be disgusted with that behavior and that deliberate erasure, which stands in stark contrast to the way that the glorification of the modeling and beauty industries that incessantly and insidiously hide, suppress, and normalize the abuse and exploitation of the young and vulnerable.  In the past five years, there has been a meteoric rise of young women commodifying their own bodies on platforms like OnlyFans.  While it is not a larger institution, like in modeling, these platforms operate on a false sense of empowerment.  While they purport to empower women by allowing them to take agency over their sexuality and monetize it on their own terms, the nature of this digital sexwork platform differs little from ages-long the capitalistic and patriarchal exploitation of young women.  The narrative of self-empowerment that OnlyFans promotes can be much likened to the narrative that Humbert Humbert weaves of Dolores’ seduction of him: false, and created by the person in power who benefits from the vulnerable’s participation—which is never the vulnerable party herself.  

 The online morons hating The Odyssey movie have also attacked the translator Emily Wilson. From Emily Wilson on Porous Boundaries and the World of Homer (Los Angeles Review of Books), I think she sounds charming, well-intentioned, and competent.

CC and I were supposed to see a movie. Shew was too tired, it was too hot. Not that I really expected her to go along. Since I was waiting for a call from my sister, I stayed home wating for her call.

Reading around this morning, awakening before the alarm:

‘The China Question’ by Ho-fung Hung review (History Today)

Despite its historical focus, The China Question is not written for historians. It is very much a ‘Grand Theory’, supported by rich case studies drawn from a wide-ranging secondary literature. While its ambitiousness is laudable, it also opens up some pitfalls. An attempt to recount 800 years in 260 pages necessarily results in a loss of nuance. One of the more problematic aspects of Hung’s argument is its own replication of a binary view, much like the orientalism he critiques. His suggestion that for eight centuries almost all Western writings on China swung between two equally orientalist poles ends up overlooking the enormous ‘third space’ that has long existed in between. Martino Martini, for instance, wrote two extraordinarily erudite accounts of China’s chronology and geography in addition to his punchier account of the fall of the Ming, painting the empire and its history as connected to, but different from, Europe’s. Where Matteo Ricci and Nicolas Trigault – earlier Jesuit missionaries in China – argued that the Chinese were peace-loving and thus ‘differ greatly from the nations of Europe’, Martini offered more nuance. In his lengthy Chinese history, Sinicae historiae decas prima (1659), he explained that, rather than being timeless and unchanging, Chinese wartime strategies depended on their particular contexts and often involved learning from their enemies. Many of Hung’s case studies contain complex perspectives which he overlooks. Indeed, his decision to see things as either Sinophilic or Sinophobic risks simplifying rather than critically probing the historical record. This is perhaps best captured by a table produced at the end of the book: ‘Eight hundred years of fantasy-fear cycles’, covering different ‘fields’ – from ‘Catholic scholarship’ in the 1240s to ‘Political discourses disguised as scholarship’ from the 1990s to the present – gives a binary overview of the evolution of attitudes towards China, tracking the pendulum swing from Sinophilia to Sinophobia. 

 “The Odyssey” Movie Review (The New Yorker): wanted more Bronze Age barbarity.

Strange Pilgrims (@strangepilgrims): "Albert Camus on life and freedom" 

 Counterbalancing the idiocy of Indiana Republicans (which is for another post):

Indy queer horror film 'Jodi' to premiere at Tibbs Drive-In 

Arts & Culture - Mirror Indy 

Off to Indy today for another visit to the law school library. 


 

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Reading Lists, Writing Examples, Making The Writing Work

 I got suckered a little by the following video, then I realized it's value.


 It gives us a list not compiled by some stody old fart. That's its value.

7 Habits of Highly Annoying Novels - by Cristin White - pay attention to his editing of one passage, if nothing else!

Why Multiple POVs Can Make Readers Love Your Characters More - Helping Writers Become Authors is important to me because this is what my “Dead and Dying” stories turned "Scenes from a Small Indiana Factory” has been trying to do. So far, no success. Whether that is because no one outisde of Indiana finds the stories interesting, or because I borrowed my presentation from The Spoon River Anthology, or both, occupies my mind. Maybe it will find a home for publication before I die.

 The Story Hook Writers Miss (Not the One You Think!) has something that I particularly like, support for my own ideas. It came from reading Bertolt Brecht wanting a theater that made people think. My response was that 's cool but how do you keep their behinds in theater seats? People have to feel some attraction to the characters, that's how we keep them in their seats. This is one thing that I am still working on; it seems with my latest revisions, I am getting closer. Now, do I have time to make it all work and write something worth reading?


Think about it. Hemingway does it. Toni Morrison does it, too. 

Talk about the ultimate wounded hero, the defiant underdog, the man risking loss, the man fighting for his ideals against the world: Done Quixote? Film archivists on quest to finish Orson Welles passion project (The Guardian). Do I mean Don Quixotic or Welles? Take your pick; take both.

Never Publish a Book Without Checking This (I’m an Editor) is way ahead of where I am, but for two things. I like BookFox and its advice. Second, it reassures me that I need to work on making sure the opening chapter establishes the book. (I need do some work on that!)

 


All of which leaves me feeling like this:


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Wednesday, July 15, 2026

Rejected, Bourdain, The Most Encouraging Thing I Have Read In Ages.

 Up and working on my other writing chores. Like this post.

A rejection that came in late from  Open: Journal of Arts & Letters for “After Making Landfall”:

Thank you for your submission. We appreciate the time and trouble you took to give us the opportunity to read your work; however, we must respectfully decline to accept it for publication, as it does not satisfy our editorial needs. We will be glad to learn that this work has received prominent placement elsewhere.


Cordially,


James


Submissions Editor

I came late to Bourdain through my friend Randy K. He came to fascinate me - thoughtful without humbug. I read I wanted to be Anthony Bourdain—until I met him with sympathy, thinking how much his sort of wonder and openness and acerbic wit have disappeared from our lives.

The controversy over The Odyssey is on my mind. So is a comment made by the fellow running the group sessions. He disdains Will Ferrell for being political; he said that was why Ferrell's career has gone down hill. Nothing about Ferrell's talent, nothing about Ferrell's age; only that Ferrell's career died because of his politics.

Actors age out, comic actors age out quicker. That is my opinion. Ferrell's style was outrageous to the point of obnoxiousness. He is now of an age where that kind of routine looks sad, even desperate. That made his shelf life even shorter. Barbie showed he has more life as a supporting actor. And if you think comic actors do not age out, then give a thought to the careers of Eddie Murphy, Dan Ackroyd, Paulie Shore, and Bill Murray. Even the Marx Brothers wore down, and who was watching Bob Hope movies in the Sixties? But this thing of letting private opinions negate a performace, where doe sit come from?

I did not expect much from Has America Crossed the Asshole Threshold? for all of its provocative headline. Instead, Carlyn Beccia brightened my day, sparked my tepid optimism.

Humans have been walking up to this line for three thousand years. Most societies that crossed it died. But a few — a strange, stubborn few — stood at the edge, looked down, and did something that shouldn’t be possible: they turned around. America itself did it once, a little over a century ago, when the country was more corrupt, more violent, and more for-sale than it is now. So what changed?

A coalition of nobodies dragged it back. How they did it is the most important story nobody tells. Because we are standing at the line again — and this time we can measure it.

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Now, the finding inside the finding — the one that matters most and gets reported least: MAGA Republicans are not more willing than anyone else to personally commit violence.

Read that again. They don’t want to throw the brick. They want someone else to throw the brick for them.

The researchers are careful about what this means, and so should we be: this is a chorus, not an army. But if you’ve been paying attention for the last three thousand years, that should not comfort you, because the chorus is the mechanism. Societies don’t collapse because millions pick up weapons. They collapse because millions approve and normalize cruelty.

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And the American host, by the 1890s, was compromised at every level. Tammany didn’t hold a single voter at gunpoint — the ward voted for turkeys, knowingly, for decades. Lynchings drew crowds of ordinary citizens; the photographs sold as postcards at pharmacies, which is a sentence I need you to sit with. Race science filled lecture halls with respectable, churchgoing audiences. Standard Oil’s machine ran on thousands of willing clerks, legislators, and middlemen who knew exactly what they were carrying and carried it anyway.

The political scientist Robert Putnam—who spent decades measuring American social cohesion —found that the Gilded Age was the most atomized, low-trust, every-man-for-himself moment in the American record.

And yet, America survived.

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The actual first movers were, and I cannot stress this enough, nobodies.

Between roughly 1870 and 1920, Americans went on the greatest civic-joining spree in the country’s history — Putnam’s data show more enduring civic organizations founded in those decades than in any comparable period before or since. Unions, granges, fraternal lodges, women’s clubs, settlement houses, mutual aid societies, congregations, the PTA. Millions of people who had every reason to conclude that honesty was for suckers instead went out and found the other cooperators.

They weren’t being noble. They were being practical: alone, each of them was lunch. Together, they were a market where decency broke even.

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The threshold is real. The arithmetic is real. And the arithmetic has exactly one input you control. Every era’s turnaround began the same way: some unmeasurable number of people, each acting alone, declined to sell — and then made the single most subversive move available to a member of a collapsing civilization.

They found the people who could not be bought.

 Which is something Donald J. Trump and his ilk will not understand: there is a line where money does not matter. Where there is a different calculus of profit. The Iranians stump him because they do not care about making his kind of profit. The No Kings movement shows that people can act without the help of polical parties. It just takes a little faith.

 I have about an hour - two hours gone now since I started working this morning - before I need to get ready for the writer's group. If it is not meeting, then I will beat it back here. Meanwhile, submitting stories!


 

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Indiana A Place For Doing Business!

 Not so fast!

For all our Republican General Assembly and Governor doing all they can but selling us outright, it does not seem that we are all that great a place for business investments. Well, businesses that are not sitting at the bottom of the barrel without a need for an educated population, or one that cannot reist any wage thrown to them.

Best state economies in America in 2026 (We're not in the top ten, if you had any doubts).

Indiana is No. 10 on Top States for Business 2026 (But here we are).

And: Hicks: GOP says 'hold my beer' on incoherent tax plan

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Tuesday, July 14, 2026

The Fog Lifted A Little, So A Better Day

 I have run through Pennsylvania, made a trip to the conveince store and Payless grocery, taled to DM and CC, so not a bad day.

Can American politics get any dumber than what we have with the Orange Buffoon?

It Sure Looks Like Trump Was the One Who Damaged Reflecting Pool (The New Republic )

Ball Memorial Hospital is making news for all the wrong reasons: 'I don't know how we approve this': pharmacy board narrowly accepts drug diversion settlement (Indiana Capital Chronicle).

A rejection:

Thank you for sending us "After Making Landfall." We appreciate you giving us the opportunity to read it. Unfortunately, after careful consideration, we've decided not to pursue publication at this time. Please do not hesitate to submit to us in the future.

Thanks again and best of luck!

Sincerely,

The Editors

Black Fox Literary Magazine

An important philosophical question:


 And some good advice for living:


 

 

Two Items On Islam

No, I am not thinking of converting. Too many things about Islam do not fit with my thinking. However, there has been too much fear and hysteria about Islam since 9/11/2001. Gary Willls is a writer I have been paying attention to for around 40 years now. Seeing Garry Wills and the Q'uran on YouTube, I wanted to hear what he had to say. I think it is sensible.



 

After finding that Englesberg Ideas published The worlds that Islam made by Shiraz Maher. 

Neither McDougall nor Morrissey have written their books as explicit interventions to the current febrility that characterises so much of the public discourse about Islam’s place in the West, but their works are vital interventions, nonetheless. Their authoritative but unobtrusive expositions in a supposedly post-expert era move us beyond a hackneyed and essentialised depiction of a faith that is professed by around one quarter of humanity. Those promoting such a view, McDougall argues, are more often than not engaging in more ‘self-promoting paranoid fantasy than historically informed, judicious realism, but that has not prevented it from selling well’. 

I wonder how much of what think we know of Islam is a fever dream and how much of it is accurate. It could also be that so long as we rave we create our own problems.

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Monday, July 13, 2026

Thinking About Writing Novels

About all I can do is think. Today was another one of those days of fogginess. I do not know whether it is because of the hernias or not taking my meds as I should. I tried napping and never really fell asleep, only wasted time. I got up after 8 pm and decided to order a sandwich and work on this blog. I have not stepped out of the apartment building since this morning. Not that I feel anything lost, other than time.

Submissions made over the weekend:

 “After Making Landfall”

 Mulberry Literary 

“Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory Town, 1976 - 1984”: Missouri Review.

Something from the other day: Jack White: Frozen Charlotte Album Review | Pitchfork 

Before the portions quoted below, there as a discussion about French grammar and I wonder if that does not make a difference between their novels and ours. English is far less formal than French. Think about it. 

Hélène Bessette and the Novel as Arc Lamp by Kathryn Scanlan (Paris Review)

A traditional “realistic” novel strives to develop characters with believable physical and psychological detail, but Bessette’s approach might actually be the more lifelike one: while she pursues her narrative with a detective’s intent, the novelist remains more or less visible as the source of the artifice, and she never lets us forget that what we are reading is a text. Put another way, it’s useful to know that Bessette once described her writing as “auto-biographie realiste, non fantaisiste”—“realistic, non-fanciful autobiography”—which makes me think of Gertrude Stein, whose work Bessette read and admired. In his afterword to a later edition of Blood on the Dining-Room Floor (1948), Stein’s short novel about several mysterious incidents that occurred one summer while Stein and her partner Alice B. Toklas were living in a country house in eastern France, John Herbert Gill writes: “Like much of Gertrude Stein’s work, the detective novel she produced is a kind of interior monologue, in which past and present, the contents of the writer’s mind as well as the room and the landscape in which she is situated at the moment of writing, are joined … The ‘continuous present’ in which Gertrude Stein’s writing lives erases all distinction between the work itself and the writer as she sets it down.” For Stein—and, because everything she wrote was filtered through her particular consciousness: the first and last person.  

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There’s the sense here, as Alice Oswald says, that “it’s only when other communication is absolutely impossible that a poem has to exist.” Add to this Bessette’s notion that “traditional prose … even when it has thoughtful and intelligent things to say, remains a very commercial product.” A Poetic Novel, then, is perhaps one from which all the excess—words, commerce, false comfort—has been wrung, because the author (and her reader) is living under duress, in extremity, at a time when the finitude of life is quite clear. All of which is not to suggest that a Poetic Novel must be somber and heavy, because Twenty Minutes of Silence is nimble, playful, funny, irreverent. I particularly like the exchanges between Monsieur the Chief Inspector and his Deputy, who remind me of Chandler’s brutally absurdist cop duos (The Little Sister’s Fred Beifus and Christy French, for instance). Bessette’s impatience with the traditional elements of a novel is apparent: it seems she simply did not write what didn’t interest her. To make a profound book by stripping it to the bone (to the “I,” the first and last person)—to write, as a scrawled note in her literary archives declares, “the biggest novel of the world by the smallest novelist of that world”—that was her ambition. 

This is all for “Chasing Ashes”. I do not know what it will, only that it has to be different.

César Aira’s Art of Not Editing by Jeff VanderMeer and Ann VanderMeer (Paris Review) has this paragraph, it is what I want:

And, given the stipulation in the flight forward against revision, mistakes cannot be fixed but must be incorporated into the whole as the novel progresses, making an Aira book always surprising, even (or especially) to himself. The resulting pull of his fiction’s compulsive, ever-fresh flow along unusual narrative channels feels somehow at once both organic and precise. Perhaps it is Aira living so fully in the moment—catching his thoughts in midair as he writes his scenes—that makes life itself, in all its random strangeness, come so startlingly alive on his pages. 

Not that I this Aira's talent:

... Aira combines an innate genius for fiction with a humbling erudition—he’s read everything, and translated much of it, from Shakespeare to Stephen King—which is how he can, before our very eyes get away with his flights. Any process is, in theory, replicable, but applying Aira’s would end the career of most writers.

I just feel like my own stuff is so constituated.

Although I am not put off by Dostoyevsky nowadays, I think that has more to do with having joined the Eastern Orthodox Church, there is something true in Mark Nayler's Dostoevsky is a dreadful writer (The Spectator).

Given Dostoevsky’s reputation as one of the untouchables of literature, I was surprised at how bad his prose is. It lacks grace and balance. Instead of taught, stylish sentences, Dostoevsky works in messy, interminable paragraphs that erode the reader’s goodwill. I’m partly grateful, though, because his exhausting prose at least forced me to reflect on the complex relationship between reader and writer.   

And this is not how I would not want to be thought of:

My negative reaction to Dostoevsky, as I recently discovered, places me in distinguished company. Vladimir Nabokov once described him as “not a great writer, but a rather mediocre one – with flashes of excellent humor, but, alas, with wastelands of literary platitudes in between.” Ernest Hemingway had mixed reactions: “How can a man write so badly, so unbelievably badly, and make you feel so deeply?” he asked. For Henry James, Dostoevsky’s novels were “loose baggy monsters” and “fluid puddings.” James couldn’t finish Crime and Punishment. Reading it, he said, was “like having an illness.” 

We too often blame ourselves if we don’t like or “get” a classic work of literature, thus absolving the writer of all responsibility. But after battling my way through almost 1,500 pages of Dostoevsky, I’m in no mood to be generous. The fault is mainly his.  

Two rejections came in:

Thank you for sending "After Making Landfall." After careful consideration, we've decided this submission isn't right for AGNI.

Kind regards, The Editors

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And this for a submission from last year:

Thank you for your submission to Press Pause Press. We did not find "Coming Home" a fit for Press Pause at this time, but we appreciated the chance to consider your work, and we wish you the best of luck finding it a home.

Sincerely,

The Press Pause Press Team

 

 

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