Friday, June 26, 2026

Novels - Where Do We go From Here?

Here I am supposed to be working on my writing and getting distracted by ideas of other books. 

My excuse for why I am doing this: How F. Scott Fitzgerald’s Overlooked Story Collection Helped Me Write My LA Novel (Literary Hub) made me realize how little I knew about Fitzgerald's short stories. And the vagraies of success. And that a writer has to write.

 And The Consensus Sublime ( Los Angeles Review of Books) sealed the deal. Just goofing off, giving myself a minute of time before I started working, and then I got lost. It is a critique of The Guardian's 100 Best Novels list, and I could dismiss it as just another of many. 

What distinguishes The Guardian’s list within this long and somewhat dismal tradition is not that it judges—all canons judge—but the specific character of its public-facing authority. Academic canons carry, at least formally, the caution of scholarly qualification. They present themselves as provisional disciplinary instruments. The Guardian list borrows the aura of institutional expertise—“authors, critics and academics worldwide” voted, the editors announce—while simultaneously billing itself as a broad, democratic, cultural event, open to all. It does not offer provisional aesthetic judgments. It offers monuments.

Monuments. That did me in. Yesterday, after the writer's meeting, we got talking about how sequels suck. They keep selling us the same thing with a new package until the life goes out of what is under the package. Monuments are dead things being worshipped. Of course, Gore Vidal got there before me (albeit I should have read the essay mentioned over 30 years ago):

Beneath any such exercise lies a problem almost never seriously engaged: the question of what it means to judge a novel in the first place. Aesthetic judgment, as Gore Vidal observed across a long career of elegant provocation, is neither private mood nor laboratory fact. In his essay “Novelists and Critics of the 1940s,” Vidal argued that critics must proceed as though absolute standards for literary value exist, since without some orientation toward the absolute, relative judgments dissolve into mere preference. But to reify those standards into monuments is disastrous, as literary history repeatedly demonstrates that what one moment consecrates, the next dismantles with humiliating ease.

Here is where I became glad to have read the essay (and pretty much confirms I read the Vidal essay).

Consider what such machinery cannot easily process. There is no Honoré de Balzac on this list. The absence is not, in the first instance, an injustice to French literature. It is an exposure of the list’s narrowed theory of what the novel is.

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Lost Illusions is a novel about the manufacture of literary value, and in this, it anticipates the very social machinery by which the Guardian list itself was assembled. Vidal, returning in several essays to what he called the missing “Balzacian concern,” lamented that the disappearance of economic motive from serious fiction represented a narrowing of the form itself, a retreat from the novel’s appetite for entangling human consciousness with narrative structure.

In Balzac, money is never merely money; it is the medium through which every other value—love, friendship, artistic integrity, political conviction—is tested and, usually, dissolved. A list that cannot accommodate this novel has quietly decided, without admitting it, that the novel’s proper business lies in moral illumination, perhaps, or psychological interiority, or the production of teachable social empathy. These are not unworthy concerns. But they are not the whole of what the novel, at its most exorbitant and alert, knows how to do.

And Balzac’s absence is not an omission. It is a theory.

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The omissions that matter most in the Guardian list are not, then, a grievance catalog. They are, again, a theory. Naguib Mahfouz’s Cairo Trilogy (1956–57) is absent; so are Sadegh Hedayat’s The Blind Owl (1936) and Rabindranath Tagore’s The Home and the World (1916). These works do not deserve inclusion as diplomatic representatives of their traditions—not that every tradition warrants a seat. These works make formal, philosophical, and affective claims that exceed a significant portion of what the list includes.

Mahfouz’s absence, Hedayat’s absence, Tagore’s absence—these do not reflect regional bias or demographic oversight. They reflect the list’s operative theory of the novel, which turns out, on examination, to be a theory of Anglophone teachability and institutional processability, disguised as universal aesthetic judgment. The omitted novel is not merely absent. It exposes what the list, by its inclusions, silently presupposes. 

 I was reading Mahfouz, finally, then got sidetracked. More reason to get back to him. And for a call to arms that I cannot resist:

The novel’s actual history is older, stranger, more monstrous, more multilingual, and wilder than any professional consensus can accommodate. A counter-list of the institutionally neglected would only be parochialism reversed, the same divination performed with different auspices. The solution would require a different account attentive to what counts as true novelistic achievement, and that cannot be recovered by a better poll.

It can only be reopened by reading: by the willingness to let unfamiliar formal ambitions disturb the machinery through which recognition, in any given moment, decides what it is prepared to call great.

I have waited too long to be good at what I want to do.  But maybe I still have time to do something useful.

Previously, I had read Weekly Readings #228 (06/15/26-06/21/26) - by John Pistelli  (THE GREATEST BOOKS OF THE 20TH CENTURY). Which is almost the opposite of trying to make a canon.

What are you going to do?

What are Midwestern writers? When I started Central European writers, I thought I found people in the same position as I was. Reading Mitsuyoshi Numano's Is There Such a Thing as Central (Eastern) European Literature? An Attempt to Reconsider Central European Consciousness on the Basis of Contemporary Literature keeps that idea alive. Take away the difference in a monolingual culture. Indiana is small and torn up by identity issues. We are not Easterners, although much of our past comes from there, and we have our envy of New York. We are not Southerners; for all of those came from there to here, for all of us having some of the same values; and the West is too rough and tumble to be us, even as our own past was just as rough and tumble. 

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Thursday, June 25, 2026

Misery and The Only Things That Have Excited Me The Past Few Days

 It has been a rough week, pain distracts and saps my energy; the simplest things take too long. I can do my research project, up to a point. I have been trying to find the stuff I need for revising “Agnes” and getting her out. That was two days ago. This post was started over 2 hours ago. Interrupted by the distraction of aches that should have been gone days ago but not (at least the bleeding stopped) and a computer crash. I thought to take in a movie today, but I am going nowhere except for smokes and caffeine.

Yesterday, I made it to Walmart for some meds. And down to the convenience store for smokes. There was also the writer's group. Then an afternoon of annoying, distracting agony followed where I got nothing more than a few articles read and watching “The Umbrella Academy.” It is easier to watch a tv show than a movie; I can get away from it quicker. The only problem is when the silly thing turns out to have some intriguing points. Like wrapping a dysfunctional family up into a superhero story that is also a satire of the superhero; a story where the heroes are the cause of the problem rather than its solution.

Tuesday was just about like Wednesday - only out briefly - but more miserable. 

I read The New ‘Odyssey’ Movie Is Sparking a Right-Wing Backlash. This Female Scholar Knows It Well (WIRED). Elon Musk is a silly person; so are these criticisms of Nolan's The Odyssey. Imaginations limited by their knowledge they are inadequate to the job. A black woman plays Helen? So what? Can she act? Yesterday I mentione I intended to see Supergirl to the bus driver, and he refused to consider it because of Milly Alcock's politics. What does politics have to do with how she can act? Nothing. It is the fear that they who do not share their politics can do the job. Anyone who fears their ideas cannot bear scrutiny knows their ideas are insubstantial.

A Rural Awakening? – Sheila Kennedy. Farmers seeing they've been conned by Trump? Well, they live pretty close to the bone, so they might be the first to feel reality creeping in from behind all the BS spewed by the President.

I had a great aunt who introduced me to politics. This September she will be dead 40 years. She liked betting on horse races; she was the only person in my family who has been to Churchill Downs. When Indiana was fighting over legalizing betting on horse racing, she condemned the Republicans controlling the General Assembly as being paid off by the surrounding states. The Republicans talked about the deletrious moral effects this would have on Indiana - that it might end in prostitution being legal. Well, that didn't happen - outside the Republican Party. Now, they're doing the same thing with marijuana: Using data to guide cannabis policy decisions ( Indiana Capital Chronicle).

By the way, my great aunt always voted straight ticket Republican.

Instead of morals, we've got bitterness and anger and hate and fear.

 Supreme Court allows immigration officials to turn away asylum seekers at the border (POLITICO)

'Nobody wants you here': Shakopee residents harass Somali family while house shopping (FOX 9 Minneapolis-St. Paul)

Supreme Court sides with maker of Roundup weedkiller (AP News).

 America's great political implosion (Axios)

 Annoyed by the low-level rumbling of pain, I am done with posting for now. I'll use the time to get some things done here (the dishes do not wash themselves), go down to the convenience store), then deal with “Agnes”. Let's see if will matches desire.

Wishful thinking for me, considering age and the tolls paid: 


 

Remember the Rock Island Line!


 

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Thinking About Rejections and Getting Them

Finding Your Angel in the Haystack  (Lit Mag News) took me into places I do not really know - publishing and the magazine market - even though I have been in the middle of it for the better part of five years. It also confirmed what I sensed as a viable approach is correct.

For many writers (especially those new to the publication game), a submission rejection is a conclusive stamp of disapproval from a respectable institution. The whole of the organization that sends it, along with many others in short order, are raining “NO!” down upon you, decisively, and with regularity. You are left cold and shivering, drenched in negatives, and will need to spend a goodly amount of time getting dry before you can weather that storm again. Rejections are depleting. They are setbacks. You do not pass go. You do not collect $200.

That feeling of depletion certainly doesn’t serve you. Especially when you consider that quiet battles are actually raging at all of your favorite lit pubs, and your work may well be at the center of them. You’ll get clues to that possibility embedded in some of your rejections, and once you know what to look for, you can walk away from rejections energized.

Putting rejections into perspective: (3) Ted Gioia (@tedgioia): “This is a good time to recall that Gabriel García Márquez got rejected by The New Yorker in 1981—and the next year he won the Nobel Prize in Literature.”  

Two rejections received so far for this week. 

6/24: 

Thank you for submitting your work, "Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory Town, 1836 – 1984." Regretfully, we cannot find a place for it in our upcoming issue, but we wish you the best of luck placing it elsewhere.

At Epiphany we are committed to evaluating every submission we receive thoughtfully and respectfully. Many issues factor into every decision we make either to publish a piece or pass on it, from its consonance or dissonance with other work we've accepted to the simple issue of personal preference, which cannot be anything but subjective. To familiarize yourself with the work we do (and some of the work we've loved best), check out our website, subscribe to our print magazine, or consider buying a digital subscription for full access to our current issues and 20+ year archives.

To keep up to date with Epiphany, join our newsletter or follow us on Instagram, Facebook, X, Bluesky, Threads.

We value long relationships with the writers and artists who entrust us with their work, and hope you’ll keep us in mind for other submissions in the future.

Sincerely,

The Editors

 6/25: “After Making Landfall” garnered another rejection.

Thank you for sending us your submission for consideration for the Fairlight Books short stories website.

Unfortunately, we didn’t think that the story was quite right for our list, so we will decline from publishing your work on this occasion. Please do not feel that this is a reflection on your writing. We enjoyed reading your work, and felt it was well written.

Please feel free to take a look at the stories on our website to get a feel for what we are publishing, and we would welcome further submissions of short stories from you in the future.

Best wishes,

The Fairlight Books Editorial Team

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Fairlight Books Ltd
Summertown Pavilion, 18–24 Middle Way, Oxford, OX2 7LG
https://www.fairlightbooks.co.uk/

 Ideas of what to do after being rejected: (4) No MFA Required - by Kristen Weber 

The good news is that you don’t need an editor’s title to do the same thing. The next time you read your manuscript, don’t try to fix anything. Print a hard copy out if you can and mark the places where you have a reaction.

B for bored.

C for confused.

R for rushed.

M for more.

Don’t stop to solve the problem. Don’t rewrite the chapter. Don’t convince yourself the feeling isn’t real. Just mark it and keep going. By the time you reach the end of the manuscript, you’ll have something incredibly valuable: a map.

I have been trying to find the energy I need for revising “Agnes” and getting her out. That was two days ago. This post was started over 2 hours ago. Interrupted by the distraction of aches that should have been gone days ago but not, and a computer crash. I thought to take in a movie today, but I am going nowhere except for smokes and caffeine. Today is the day to deal with my story, and I am applying Ms. Weber's ideas to the story.

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Monday, June 22, 2026

A Submission and A Piece About Getting paid

 First, Q: Why do so few literary magazines pay contributors...when so many genre magazines do?  (Lit Mag News) explains a bit about the culture of literary magazines. I have been targeting those who pay something first, especially since most charge a reading fee. It is just that I have spent most of my life thinking there has to be a profit for labor. I temper that with the thoughts of building a resume and getting the experience. This essay makes non-payment easier to swallow knowing what I am writing has no real home.

Such as “Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory, 1976–1984”, which got another rejection yesterday.

Thank you for sending "Pieces About A Small Indiana Factory, 1976 - 1984" to Southeast Review. While we haven't chosen the story for publication, we are grateful for the opportunity to have read and considered it. We wish you the best of luck placing it elsewhere. 

Sincerely,

The Editors

Southeast Review

http://www.southeastreview.org

Better than a sharp stick to the eye.

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Sunday, June 21, 2026

Books on Writing

 I Was Lied To About 'On Writing' by Stephen King is another testament to that book on writing. As I have written before on here, I was told around the turn of the century to read it, but I did not, and when I did my first reaction was that I had been a damn fool for waiting too long. 

I would say at it’s core, the two messages that are strongest in this book are that of honesty and Joy. Stephen king talks a lot about how the only way to write things organically and convincingly, whether it be characters or dialogue or your writers voice, Is to be honest with yourself, and to put that honesty on the page. I think confirmation of this was present throughout the entire book, and I can say with little doubt that Stephen King is genuinely himself.

His next message however, is about joy, and how joy is both the motivation for writing, and the point of writing. This is evident from his constant life stories about his family, his wife, and his children. It even includes his story of being hit by a car (sorry for leaving that out).

I think to show you the essence of this message, I will leave you with one final quotes of “ON Writing”:

“Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well. It’s about getting up, getting well, and getting over. Getting happy, okay?”

The best book on writing I’ve ever read - by Mason Currey is about a book directed more to essayists, but I found it applied to me.

In the book, Gornick provides an insightful and convincing answer to a question that has always nagged at me, namely: Why do certain pieces of writing “work” while others emphatically do not, despite the author’s best intentions and maximum effort?

Gornick begins with a simple observation about selves: that all of us contain a variety of them. One person might be, for instance, “a daughter, a lover, a bird-watcher, a New Yorker,” among many other things. And a piece of writing succeeds when the writer invokes the best self to tell the particular story at hand.

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Gornick argues that every work of literature has a situation—“the context or circumstances, sometimes the plot”—and a story—“the emotional experience that preoccupies the writer: the insight, the wisdom, the thing one has come to say.” The persona is like the bridge between these two: the vehicle for transforming a situation into a story. At the same time: By telling the story, the persona comes into focus and this is the story as much as what is told.

This last version of “Agnes” is on my mind. I sent it off to KH with plenty of questions. But the biggest question is why it takes me so long to see how to tell a story best. I still think it comes down to me not seeing the forest for the trees, that obsessing over composition obscures the composition. I take it as a sign that I still do not know what I am doing, and what I am doing then I am not doing a good job.

Speaking of which, I devoured this, running a checklist of what I do: Don't over-engineer how the reader "hears" your words (Nathan Bransford)

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Saturday, June 20, 2026

Dumb, Dumb, Dumb, But A Pretty Good Day

 I finished editing “Agnes” after 10:30 today. So, about 4 hours of work on that.

Beautiful, sunny day, and out of cigarettes I decided I was going to get a pack of Luckies and go to the farmer's market  at Minnestrista. Missed my buses going downtown, so I decided to walk from the convenience store at University and Reserve. This was ever so dumb. I aggravated the hernias during my walk without getting any at the market.

I caught the #6 downtown. It was going on 12:15. The Mall bus would be leaving again at 12:45, and “The Death of Robin Hood” started at 1:15. The last Mall bus was at 5:15. I had wanted to go see the movie, editing “Agnes” had left me tired of working on the computer or even going home, so I went to get lunch at The Downtown Food Stand. 

There I had a delicious smash burger. They will soon be doing a New York style pizza! 

The Muncie Mall is now another derelict, a ghost. It is soon to be demolished, but I wonder if it can regain its role as a commercial center. The true mark of its status is that the Mall bus no longer stops there. 

“The Death of Robin Hood”is superb but very serious; not a date movie. It got a little weird as I was blinking out towards the end. Not that it was boring . I just run out of energy kind of thing. That sums me up - tired. 

I have been going through my email, eating dinner, listening to YouTube videos.

But I think I will be calling it a night for any more writing.

What kind of medical school did this guy go to:


 

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Friday, June 19, 2026

Thursday, Good Until Lousy; Friday Was Just Strange

 Yesterday, I started reqiring "Agnes". A bit more than a rewrite and also not quite a rewrite; the dailog changed to another character, the reappearance of the cat put to the end, same ending as the last revision but a bit more added. The one editorial feedback I got was brief:

Although there is much about your story that is commendable (e.g. interesting plot, some lovely phrasing) resubmission has been recommended after additional workshopping. According to FIJ Fiction Editor Joan Hawkins, your story "need[s] to be tightened, and in places, motivation needs to be clarified" while it would "benefit from a supportive writers group critique all around." 

Okay, I thought it was tight before and so I had to look at what could be squeezed more. I went into left field to find a squeezer. 

That helped with the motivation, I think. I could have just spelled out the woman had been fighting against death since she was 11, and she thought forcing her daughters upwards the social ladder. Especially since I had all that in every version of this story.

Not sure why it would need a writers group critique all around. I am not even sure if the Muncie writers group is meeting. I went WEdnesday and no one was there. I also got no emial that it was not meeting. Paranoia is creeping in, but I chose to ignore it. I could email the leader if I were not working on the writing as hard as I have been.

I finished today. Well, all but the editing. I am too tired for that right now.

 Yesterday, I went to the sheriff's. The DOC decided I am seriously dangerous, and I am now on the lifetime reporting list. Before it was 25 years, of which I have 20 more years. Pretty sure that was a lifetime sentence as well. Oddly, the officer said something about my PO requesting an update. That seems strange, a little out of what I understand to be his remit.

Whatever I ate the day before caused me no small amount of pain. I also aggravated the hernias. Worn and hurting, I had problems concentrating enough to work on the story. I did some more research for the con law project. Then I just shut down my brain by watching Netflix. 

Another thing I did was change my syntax. It seems when I get away from the straightforward reporting of events, I start doing even stranger things. The tone, the pacing, came to me Wednesday night when I was trying to sleep.

 I did get some reading of the New York Review of Books while I was stuck at the courthouse. Maybe I should go more often.

But this morning I jumped right into the craziness. I missed my bus downtown because I was writing. A similar thing happened this afternoon, where I look at the computer clock and it is an hour or more since I last looked.

Group, Payless, Dumpling House, and it was over 90 minutes getting back here. 

For Juneteenth: Samuel Miller McDonald's Can We Really Claim That Civilization is on the Steady Path of Progress?

The representation of marginalized identities in power, business, or media is often hailed as indisputable proof of progress. But this representation does not yield improvements for most people who share those identities any more than having monarchs and emperors of a certain race or gender has improved conditions for workers and peasants of the same race and gender during history’s millennia of slavery, serfdom, and conscription. Such representation is more often used as a tactic for blocking egalitarian policies than for achieving them.

After all the time I spent in the debates of Indiana's 1850 constitutional convention, the more I am thinking such articles are too realistic for Americans' brains. Well, white Americans.

The scariest thing since my release is me agreeing with Mona Charen. Check out her How to Keep Loving America.

America has demonstrated a capacity for self correction in the past. Suffrage was gradually expanded from white property owners to all white men and then to black men and finally women. Slavery was obliterated by the Civil War. The greed and peculation of the Gilded Age gave way to the progressive era. McCarthy’s reckless bullying was rebuked by Congress. Nixon’s crimes were followed by government reforms.

It’s possible that we have crested as a nation and are now in permanent decline. As Shakespeare said,

There is a tide in the affairs of men
Which, taken at the flood
leads on to fortune
Omitted, all the voyage of their life
Is bound in shallows and in miseries.

Perhaps we’re past it. But when you consider our strengths and our virtues, giving up on loving this country and working to steer it towards a better future would be a tragic dereliction.

 

Needing something lighter to rundown the time before calling a night, I checked out movie reviews. I must admit I was curious but not so keen about Spielberg's new movie, and the review from The Guardian pretty much sucked the keenness out of me.

Alienated by Disclosure Day? You are not alone

I cannot remember the last time I saw a Spielberg movie at the theater. Looking at this filmography, it was Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull and before that Catch Me If You Can.

Much more interesting: Effi o Blaenau review – Greek myth retelling Iphigenia in Splott becomes blistering Welsh-language film. Assuming it has subtitles and would play in Muncie, Indiana.

Edward Burns used to make movies that I liked to watch but he has gone under my radar for a long time now. I saw the preview for his latest on YouTube, and today rogertebert.com put out a review, Finnegan’s Foursome:

“Finnegan’s Foursome” is a lot like those Adam Sandler comedies he would make with his buddies that were secretly just paid vacations. The film has little going on other than the Finnegans playing golf and arguing with one another. There are no discernible subplots of any importance, and the petty rivalries between the foursome are just that: petty and easily resolved. Freddy doesn’t just have a chip on his shoulder over his dad’s absence and unbeaten streak; he’s carrying an entire tree log. He’s easily the most unlikeable of the bunch. Burns is usually pretty good at finding the charming lug within the acerbic exterior, but he misses the mark here.

Not with what movies cost nowadays.

Maybe this one, if it comes to Muncie: Maddie’s Secret.

Refreshingly gracious, Early’s management of humanity in “Maddie’s Secret” is the heart of this film. Bolstered by his always-confident panache and showcasing a new dexterity in nimble storytelling and emotional arcs, Early’s debut is exciting: a debutant ball for a new voice in filmmaking, unafraid of kitsch, camp, and unabashed tenderness riding in tandem with humor. It overflows with affection for everyone, but of course Maddie in particular, the film’s love letter to the contemporary woman: an inheritor of patriarchal and misogynist pressures, a self-starter, a mediator between the real and ideal, and a defiantly passionate figure of resilience.

I know the name Dwight Macdonald. He is one of those names lurking in footnotes, or even in the main text, of the times between WWII and the mid-Sixties. So, Geoff Shullenberger's review essay Dwight Macdonald’s American Century (Compact) looked like a way to add some fill to that hole in my education. It helped to want more. Going to college years after the fall of Saigon, I can see why I did not hear more of him then.

The Macdonald essays collected in the new anthology Atrocities of the Mind focus heavily on America’s wars and showcase the consistency of his oppositional posture throughout the period of American ascendancy. Macdonald departed from Partisan Review, the flagship magazine of the anti-Stalinist left and incubator of the New York Intellectuals, after Pearl Harbor, over his fellow editors’ feeling that now “it was their war and their country,” which he didn’t share. He launched his own magazine, Politics, as a venue for what remained of left-wing opposition to the war. Macdonald’s venture helped launch a number of careers, including that of the radical sociologist C. Wright Mills and the social critic Paul Goodman, and introduced the writing of Simone Weil to US readers; George Orwell was an admirer and contributor.  

 But I think I do like him: 

What set Macdonald apart from his later New Left antiwar allies—and their successors today—was that his views didn’t proceed from any abstract ideological commitment to “anti-imperialism,” much less to sympathy for the political causes of America’s enemies. Instead, his concern was with “the horror of vast technological power exerted in war-making.” The technological transformation of warfare had brought about a state of “perfect automatism” characterized by an “absolute lack of human consciousness or aims,” culminating in the construction of the nuclear doomsday machine. Rational technoscientific methods had given rise to an entirely irrational, mechanized system that seemed increasingly bent on human destruction. 

I forgot he was the one who coined the phrase Masscult. What the essay does with that is worth clicking on the link and reading for yourself.

 Reading A La Zoug-Zoug Relish: The Extraordinary Life of Alexis Soye was both fun and uplifting.

And there I will leave you to read a bit from The Atlantic. They will be behind a paywall, so I will leave them out of here.

I got on another Roy Wylie Hubbard kicj this morning, so I will close out with him.


 

 Good night.

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