If the weekend was one debacle after another, today has been a whimpering, lamed progress towards not much.
I went to Walmart first thing this morning to buy a new belt. When I got back here, I lost all energy and fell asleep until almost 11 AM.
I got through some of my emal. There were two other posts finished. The bedroom and kitchen tidied. Then I wrapped up this one. I want to get to Vespers, so that is all for now.
Storytelling: Writing Chapters and Scenes (Writing Forward)
Each scene is a miniature story within the story and has a beginning, middle, and end. A scene opens, there’s conflict, and then the scene closes. At the scene level, conflict is usually minor; the larger story conflict is spread throughout the entire story.
Some storytellers say that each scene should contain an emotional transition, which can help build tension into a scene and gives the story emotional flow. If a scene starts on a positive note (the protagonist is happy), then it can end on a negative note (the protagonist is sad). These emotional or tonal shifts don’t need to be intense or dramatic. Something as simple as showing a clumsy character spilling wine all over his white shirt can give a scene a downward emotional shift.
However, these emotional shifts are not required—and in fact, they’re not always possible. Some stories require a series of scenes that maintain a constant tone without significant emotional shifts.
The core function of any scene is to move the story forward with plot and character development. The more development a scene contains, the richer it becomes. One scene can move the plot forward while another scene develops the protagonist, but if the plot and character development can be contained within a single scene (rather than two separate scenes), then that scene will be more powerful.
Nathaniel Hawthorne’s notebooks reveal the strange workings of his imagination
Hawthorne’s notebook fragments are wide-ranging, but certain themes repeatedly crop up: the psychology of divided selves, tensions between men and women and even possibilities for a better world. As he hopefully imagines in a stand-alone fragment: “Cannon transformed to church-bells.”
Who was Hawthorne the writer? A neo-Puritan moralist? A social realist? A modernist? A romancer? The fragments complicate rather than answer such questions. In his preface to “The Scarlet Letter,” Hawthorne remarks on his desire to “keep the inmost Me behind its veil.”
But with the help of the fragments, we get behind the veil, at least a bit – and glimpse something like what Sophia believed was the spirit informing Hawthorne’s writing.
Weekly Readings #247 (11/03/26-11/08/26) - by John Pistelli
... There is no one book you can read to make you a great writer if you don’t otherwise have it in you to be one and no one book whose omission will doom you if you do have it in you. Both anti-intellectualism and an idolatry or fetishization of mere bookishness4 can mislead an author. Modernism, for example, bore witness to both tendencies: Lawrence at his worst over-valuing blood and instinct while Pound sank his poetry under trivia he thought the key to history. I got to certain books late in life myself. I don't think I read the Aeneid—and even then only in translation—until I was 30, a more foundational text (until its displacement by the full recovery of Homer) it’s hardly possible to imagine. You should read the most obvious classics that still have currency sooner rather than later. If you’re reading this but haven’t read Hamlet, please stop reading this right now and go read Hamlet. In response to a similar question earlier this year, I noted that the core works of the western canon, everything before the explosion of print culture in modernity, are a fairly small and manageable set: the Bible, Homer’s Iliad and Odyssey, the major Greek tragedies (the Oresteia, the Theban plays, Medea and Bacchae) and Platonic dialogues (the Apology, Symposium, Republic), Ovid’s Metamorphoses and Virgil’s Aeneid, Dante’s Divine Comedy, Cervantes’s Don Quixote, the major plays of Shakespeare (A Midsummer Night’s Dream, As You Like It, Hamlet, King Lear, Othello, Macbeth, The Tempest), Milton’s Paradise Lost. But you don’t need to read all of those before you write a novel. The “western canon,” which is essentially a 20th-century construct (cf. Naomi on “Great Books”), was not always equally available to all the great writers. Dante did not read Homer; Shakespeare did not read Homer or Dante. As Ian Watt long ago pointed out in The Rise of the Novel, many of the early major novelists, like Defoe and Richardson, were in fact marked by their non-elite non-education in the Greek and Roman classics, which they either didn’t read at all or read in translation, as we tend to do. I did hate the way the rival identity politics of the last decade and a half dismissed so many still good and still relevant classics, the English canon of poetry and novels, Shakespeare and Jane Austen, because the one side regarded them as white imperial oppressors and the other side as effete relics for the liberal elite. When I wrote this a few years ago, people responded as if I’d meant to criticize “the woke”—and I don’t have a lot of patience for left-wing canon-smashing when a left-wing defense of the canon as extending high culture to all is the more obvious and (if I may) dialectical position—but I actually had in mind some of the more literalist exponents of “men’s literature” who often establish their bona fides by going on podcasts and saying they don’t read such gay stuff as Austen or George Eliot.5 To return to your question, though, let me cite the aforementioned Pound in one of his sounder judgments from ABC of Reading, a book I’ve carried around with me since high school despite my generally not being a Poundian: “Great literature is simply language charged with meaning to the utmost possible degree,” his enlargement of the equation he chanced upon in a German-to-Italian dictionary, “Dichten = Condensare.” The prerequisite to serious writing, then, is not reading this or that particular work, but a period of immersion in—serious contemplation of—some number of the greatest works where language is so charged, both to study consciously how this energizing can be accomplished as a matter of method and to incorporate unconsciously the experience or what I have elsewhere called the music of such intensive energetics....
Think about this because I am thinking about this, something I have been known to do much of:
... One final piece of advice though: read poetry no matter what you intend to write. Poetry is the base or basis of all literature, its taproot into the vaster reservoirs of orature, of music, of dance, as well as the form in which language is always maximally charged. We read prose sentenced by sentence, sometimes even paragraph by paragraph or chapter by chapter, but poetry word by word.
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